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The official cover art and other interesting news.

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Yes, here it is! The official cover for Bonnie’s Story: A Blonde’s guide to Mathematics. And how wonderful does it look? Huge thanks to Dean Harkness for his fabulous work. I wanted something in this style, due to my liking of said style, after seeing it used on the covers of some of my favourite author’s books. Does that make sense? Hope so. Anyway, I got it. Yay!

And with the cover done and officially out there for all to see, more fun and exciting things are happening. Not only will my eBook be appearing on Goodreads and other online ‘booky places’ soon, but we will really be getting into publicity events and putting Bonnie’s Story out there for people to see. If you are a book reviewer, and would be interested in giving my eBook the once over before its official launch, please contact Hague Publishing and discuss with them.

In other fantastic news, not only does it look like I will get a Launch for Bonnie’s Story at Adelaide’s Writer’s Week, but my local (and much loved) library, the Mount Barker Community Library, has offered themselves as a venue to the official eBook is released on June 15th! Call it a Local Launch maybe? As a supporter of all things local, and a lover of the Adelaide Hills and its glorious community, I am very honoured to be given the opportunity to have a launch in my ‘home’.

The official flyers cum invites are also now being finalised with the hopes I can start distributing them soon. They are for the Launch ‘do’ during Writer’s Week and, as it’s nearly a month away, I am getting a little nervous about it all. Very exciting.

Okay, well, that’s enough enthusiastic waffling from me for now. I just wanted to show off the gorgeous cover and pass on my latest bit of news. Once we have more things finalised, I will once again be posting here.

Have fun until then!

Janis.

 
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Posted by on January 26, 2013 in Writing

 

Any day now… honest!

Not being very good at building suspense, please don’t feel this is a sad attempt to do so, as it’s honestly not.

I just felt like blogging and so here I am. I received the Proof Reader and Publisher massive edit of Bonnie’s Story, pouted a bit at it being nearly 700 words shorter than I thought it had been last time I saw it, and then had a general whinge on online social media at all the red (and blue as they’d both been ruthless) changes.

Still, I knuckled down, spent my weekend ignoring the kids, yelling at the husband to take the kids away so I could ignore them better, and really just went through it all. Thankfully most of it was punctuation changes. I seem to never get my commas in the right place. And, strangely, I seem to have a blind spot for the word ‘that’ and tend to leave it out a bit.

Then there was all the standardising of how things were said. Was it red haired or red-haired? Cow pat, cow-pat or cowpat? Was the dog Mr Doodles, Mr Doodle, or did I really still want the dog? I stood my ground on a few things and removed them from being removed, but generally went with the flow and do hope it makes for a better read. You’ll never know, but at least all your cowpats and red-heads should look in order. 😉

So, Saturday I read it and dealt with all the changes. That night I started re-reading the first 50,000 words I’ve written on my new MS tentatively called Isis, Vampire and Ghosts – Oh My! and then went back to Bonnie’s Story on the Sunday. I found it interesting to chop and change between the two as they’re both written in first person, and yet I’ve done my damnedest to make the heroines as dissimilar as I can. Hopefully Stephanie will turn out just as interesting, but not identical, to Bonnie. I have, however, discovered that in all my stories (these two and Grey currently being reviewed by Hague Publishing) my characters do tend to snort and roll their eyes a lot. I am told it is a trait they have picked up from their creator. As well as the tendency to tell people to go bite them… Oops?

Monday morning, I bid Bonnie’s Story a fond farewell and hoped I wouldn’t be seeing her to be edited again. I could seriously just keep picking at it and changing it forever. But I’ve put my pens down and handed it in at the front of the class and hope it’s all acceptable.

Adding to the total lack of suspense this blog post provides – I have seen the near finished covered and it’s brilliant! Now, I know you think I’m going to say that no matter what as it’s my book cover. But, you know what? I’d give this book a look from its cover, even if I’d not written it. It’s all down to Dean Harkness and his ability to turn my whims, wishes and ideas into basically what I wanted. Woo hoo!

The other important things I’ve done to for my soon to be finished book is I chose the vignettes (can also be known as those curly things you put under the chapter number to make it stand out), wrote an ‘About the author’ that was so very cringe worthy, and did the dedication. All I will say on the dedication is it is to one person only… and if I’ve not contacted you about it, it’s not you. Surprise!

And to put all my family and friends at ease, or worry them more as the case may be, I do hope there will be more books and I will do my best to squeeze in a dedication to you there. Just be nice, as not all dedications have to be. 😉

Okay, so that’s this week’s update. I should find out on the weekend how badly my response to the editing actually was and then move forward from there.

Enjoy and have fun until next time!

Janis.

 
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Posted by on January 23, 2013 in Writing

 

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New year – New Update to Bonnie’s Story.

Hello again everyone,

So, while we’re still awaiting the big Launch book party for Bonnie’s Story on March 2nd at the SA Writer’s Centre, what exactly am I doing?

What’s that? You had no idea I was having a Launch of the eBook? Well, I am. Basically, during Adelaide’s Writer’s Week this year, I’ve been lucky enough to get the opportunity to show off Bonnie’s Story. However, as the eBook isn’t actually out until June this year, I’ve been a little creative in getting it Launched in March. I simply couldn’t miss the chance at being part of the Writer’s Week festival, rather than just a spectator. So! If you want to come along to an evening of me discussing Bonnie’s Story, do let me know. Alternatively, you can RSVP to: contact@haguepublishing.com.

What else? Last week I sent back my response to the first edit of Bonnie’s Story. There weren’t as many red corrections as expected, which was good. Now just awaiting the Official Proof Reader’s verdict, as well as the fine tooth comb edit my Publisher has given Bonnie’s Story to see if I need to make any more changes. Meaning, there could still be red corrections to come. Oh no!

What else has been happening? Have you seen my Author’s profile is up at Hague Publishing’s website? If not, you can check it out here.

And we are near the completion of the cover art to Bonnie’s Story by the very talented Dean Harkness. I am in awe of how he has cleverly taken my obscure suggestions and instructions and re-created the image I had of the cover in my mind. It may not be exactly the same, but it is so darn close it’s scary how clever he is. Once the cover art is completed and ready to be shared, never fear – it’ll be posted here!

Once I have that glorious cover art completed, I will be using it to post an official invite to my Launch for one and all here on my blog. I can’t promise chocolate at the Launch, but I can assure you’ll get information on how to be one of the first people to be able to buy a copy of Bonnie’s Story.

Do you like the re-decorating I’ve been doing to the blog? Why the chocolate theme? Well, there is an underlying theme of chocolate throughout Bonnie’s Story that, as a confirmed chocoholic connoisseur, I felt should be shared. The only problem I have with it is, if I spend too much time working on my blog, I get a desperately huge craving for the fancy choccies on display. Damn!

So, that’s you updated. Excited? As I am! Not long now until it’s all happening. Time to go brush up on reading in public I think.

Janis.

 
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Posted by on January 11, 2013 in Writing

 

The Next Big Thing Blog Hop.

Well hello again!

I’m excited to be tagged in the fantastic ‘The Next Big Thing Blog Hop’ and would like to thank the very talented Cath Staincliffe for tagging me. Isn’t she the best? I absolutely love her Blue Murder series.

The basic idea to TNBTBH is a writer with a Work In Progress or an up and coming new book is sent 10 basic questions and we then reply to it in relation to said book/ WIP.

And so, below you will find my 10 questions and their answers. I hope you enjoy and don’t snicker at them too much. 😉

What is the working title of your next book?

It’s called Bonnie’s Story with the subtitle ‘A Blonde’s guide to Mathematics’.

Where did the idea come from for the book?

It’s an idea that’s been rattling around inside my head for over 10 years now. I can’t remember if the origin was from a dream (as a lot of my stories are) or just somewhere my mind wandered to on long journeys on public transport while reading street signs.

What genre does your book fall under?

It comes under the newish genre of speculative fiction and, although it has been compared with Young Adults books, really isn’t specifically aimed at this age group.

I’ve had adults who don’t normally read YA read drafts of Bonnie’s Story and enjoyed it, so I guess any age from 16+ is good! (It has swear words, despite also having a swear jar.)

What actors would you choose to play the part of your characters in a movie rendition?

I have always freely admitted that Sylvester is strongly based on Damian Lewis’ steely blue eyed, passionate and mildly insane Soames from the Forsyte Saga. Though I admit he’s probably too old for the role now in real life. He was still the person whom, unintentionally, came to mind the more I wrote about Sylvester.

And, although I never had a real person in mind for Rogan, I did stumble across a photo of Dimitri Leonidas in torn jeans and a red flannel shirt (semi grunge) that has since made me think of him as Rogan. He’s perfect for the role, if he can pull off the right level of French accent. In the picture in question Dimitri is a little younger than what I feel Rogan is… but this is a daydream cast here so I can adjust, right? Make Dimitri Leonidas older to be Rogan, while making Damian Lewis younger to be Sylvester.

As for other characters, no idea really. Bonnie is very loosely based on me when I was young, blonde and could pull off those South Australian short shorts that are almost more a belt than real clothing. But not anymore. Get someone younger, cuter, who’s still blonde, and who can act.

Clara and the rest of the gang? Well, as most of them are also loosely based on people I grew up with, I haven’t quite met their movie star doubles.

What is the one sentence synopsis of your book?

Discover Maths that isn’t boring, as it can take you around the world with a picture and through solid walls to the Moon.

Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?

Bonnie’s Story is currently under contract with Hague Publishing and will be released by them in early 2013 as an e-book.

I, however, am unrepresented as I have found Literary Agents don’t want to touch an unknown these days. Instead, if you’re in Australia, find your local state based Writing Centre. They are awesome and so helpful in assisting you find your feet as a prospective author.

How long did it take you to write the first draft of the manuscript?

Well, if I go from when I started it to when I finished (and include the huge gaps of inactivity) maybe 3 years. If you just go on actual time spent working on it, probably more likely just under 1 year.

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

I’m really not too sure as I’ve not actually read much Speculative Fiction and haven’t read a lot of Young Adult for a few years. My Publisher has likened it to Madeleine L’Engle’s A Wrinkle in Time. I’ve read that book; sort of see the similarity, sort of don’t.

In the same way you could say it’s like YA books The Riddle of the Trumpalar by Judy Bernard-Waite, or maybe even We are Tam by Patricia Bernard as they are about the adventures of travelling to different places through everyday things.

Bonnie and her Gang are actually older than the kids in these books, which is why I feel YA may enjoy it, keeping in mind that Bonnie’s Story is really aimed at an older audience. Both books, however, were huge favourites of mine growing up so of course will have had some influence on me.

Who or what inspired you to write this book?

I really don’t know if anything really inspired me. I breathe, therefore I write and pretty much have done since I learnt to eons ago.

As mentioned, I do remember being bored on many long bus trips to and from work (before the days of e-books, MP3 players and when your mobile phone’s special feature was a calculator) and really just got to thinking “What if you could make portals where the name on a street sign took you to that place?”

Example: I wanted to go to Adelaide (when living in Brisbane) and so thought “How cool would it be to use that street sign as a point of reference and ‘POP’ be in Adelaide.” And really I just worked it out from there and made it more plausible.

Yes, there even was a Moon Street that had me thinking ‘What would happen if you used that point of reference?’

What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?

Perhaps by how it opens up the possibilities of exactly what maths and science could do, if we lived in a weird enough world. Instant global travel, doors in walls found with ‘Hidden Logic’, and something useful to  do with all those used pizza boxes?

I’d also like to think Bonnie is someone people can relate to. And who else wouldn’t want to be able to whip up some ‘Maths That Stays’, dial up a picture of the Eiffel Tower and go spend the weekend in Paris without the expense of travel or the time it would take to get there?

Got a craving for something that you can only get from that little cafe you found in a different part of the world? Maths baby!

And, please, hands up who doesn’t think a half hour round trip from Australia to Belgium for decent chocolates isn’t such a bad thing?

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Well, that’s my 10 Questions and Answers for you. I hope you enjoyed them. All I can really say now is – Tag! You’re it Leonie Rogers and D. A. Meyrick!

Leonie is the author of newly launched book Frontier Incursion, also through Hague Publishing. While Denzil’s fantastic new crime novel Whisky in small glasses has recently been released by Ringwood Publishing.

If anyone has any other questions they’d like to ask me on it, feel free. I hope you enjoyed these ones.

Janis.

 
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Posted by on December 28, 2012 in Writing

 

‘Bonnie’s Story: A Blonde’s guide to Mathematics’ is one step closer!

Hello everyone,

So this is my new blog as an up and coming author awaiting the launch of my very first ever book in early 2013 through Hague’s Publishing.

About my new book, well this is what we can share so far:

Bonnie’s Story by Janis Hill

A Blonde’s Guide to Mathematics – when hard maths meets a rolled up newspaper

Meet Bonnie, very much a woman of this century, with a distinctly Australian view on life, who’s handy with a rolled up newspaper.

Bonnie’s story starts when she notices Rogan, a young man, taking photos of street signs outside her house. Upon confronting him, Bonnie is plunged into a world of mathematics and science: a world where she visits the Moon, watches life begin, and learns the true depth of mathematics. A world where Rogan’s friends transport themselves across the globe using nothing more than smoke like algorithms and a picture in their phone. A world where, by using the science of ‘hidden logic’, doors can be created in any repetitive pattern on a vertical surface to connect to the Moon (the hang out for Rogan and his ragtag group).

As her acceptance of her new life and her relationship with Rogan blossoms (assisted by a number of quick trips by Rogan to Belgium for chocolates) she discovers that Rogan’s group is threatened by Sylvester, an outsider, who has the ability to coerce people into doing his will. That is, until he meets Bonnie and is firmly put in his place by her own anger and stubbornness.

What follows is a mad dash around the world for Bonnie and her new friends as they try to escape Sylvester, until the final climatic confrontation on the Moon.

Does it sound interesting enough yet? Well, upon request of a good friend, I will be doing a Q&A on my book in coming days. Then I hope to get some of the timelines for its release posted. For now I can say the cover art is being worked on and we’re booked for the Launch at the Adelaide Writer’s Week on March the 2nd at the SA Writer’s Centre.

What else can I tell you? Well, the above mentioned cover art is currently in its initial stages with the fantastic and incredibly talented Dean Harkness and I’m looking forward to what he can do for Bonnie and her story as I love his work.

Other than that I am awaiting the initial edit (is there going to be a lot of red corrections scrawled all over it?) and working on a few other writing projects (including a sequel to ‘Bonnie’s Story’) in between being a mum, celebrating the Solstice and Christmas and surviving the school holidays with my demonic hordes (AKA children).

This is all very exciting and I hope to bring you more news soon!

Janis.

 
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Posted by on December 15, 2012 in Writing

 

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